Ad jingles are kind of like that, too. I can’t remember where I left my keys earlier in the day but I can recite the lyrics to a Juicyfruit gum advertisement from the 1980’s nearly verbatim. So maybe fledgling writers should stop worrying too much about being “good” and instead focus on, for lack of a better term, their “flow.” It was the best of times, it was the worst of times. To be, or not to be. Imagine someone reading the audiobook of what you’re laying down, do the words keep a kind of rhythm even though they don’t rhyme? This is especially true of writing dialogue. Speak it out loud, in the voice of the character as you imagine them, and see how it sounds. That way you hopefully don’t run afoul of Harrison Ford’s apocryphal quip to George Lucas of “you can type this shit, but you can’t say it!” At very least I believe this could get you atarted, much the same as the music composers coming at the process from the other direction. It doesn’t have to be a full-on musical number, but a little bit of rhythm could go a long way.@mattstorerhere Art of the deal #comedy #music #fyp #parody #strangerthings
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Rosa isn't used to working in groups, methinks. Hopefully she's not of the "three may keep a secret if two are dead" school.
Next comic page should be coming along on July 10th, after which it'll be San Diego Comic Con time! We'll leave a "boothfinder" page up for that period and then should be continuing with the story on August 7th.